I shut my eyes
And settle in
Familiar creaks and sighs
From the house within
The distant night guard's rattle
A car driving its owner to bed
The muted rustle of pigeons
Perched precariously
On the ledge
At the edge
Of my senses.
I'm home again.
Very visual and you rhyme which not most people do.
ReplyDeleteShould ask you to one of the poetry addas when they happen.
Anjana
Absolutely lovely!
ReplyDeleteLove, Mita
Lovely, languid reading, AD. I loved the wistfulness in most of the pieces. And absolutely lovedddd 'Home'.
ReplyDeleteI wish I had the courage to commit to a blog. Maybe someday. Love Pia
Why that's lovely! Love Anu
ReplyDeletetransports me back to my childhood days in kolkata... a very comfy, fetal position.
ReplyDeleteManosh Sputnique Sengupta
That is an AMAZING piece!!
ReplyDeleteShona Patel
Jim Morrison...........don't know why this reminded me of him. Maybe sounded a little spaced out or relaxed. But nice!
ReplyDeleteAmit Roy
Thanks Amit! Being compared to Morrison! Woah!!
DeleteThanks Amit! Being compared to Morrison! Woah!!
Delete